iros-industrial's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Convenience Store Pt 2 Instru.]

A little bit repetitive

It had a really nice sound to it, but it just dragged on in a few parts. A simple solution would be to change the drum and/or bass line in certain parts. Besides that, it was pretty good.

phosphorusprocedure responds:

Good idea! I should change up the bassline and/or drums in a few parts. See, the track was originally designed for someone to rap to it, so as always I would get lazy with the melody. The bassline is just A-A-A-A and then G-G-G-G. I'll mix it up next time. Thanks for the feedback!

[2 Dolla Rhyme]

Not a great piece of music

But very entertaining =D

Scribbler responds:

We all have our different tastes. Thanks for the review.

['Berries and Cream' -{{REMIX}}]

Man that commercial annoys me

But this song is pretty funny. Not the greatest piece of music ever, but very entertaining.

BIOHAZARD responds:

thanks man. I know it s not thje best, but its still pretty good

[R-VeeBee - Hardwool]

Needs some better sounds.

Its a great idea for a song, but the sounds you used just killed it. Try making that melody sound softer. With a a few changes, it would sound so much better

R-VeeBee responds:

Yeah, you're right. Thanks for the comment.

[Plasmic Fusion [II]]

it was good

and i could hear both the trance and classic sides. well made and it sounded really cool. the only thing i would suggest would be to add a drum part.

Plasmatic responds:

thanks for the review! drum part, got it.

[Lonesome Band]

im impressed

this piece was sounded really cool. it was musically sound and well made.
you get a 5/5
(o and id appreciate it if u reviewed some of my music lol)

DeathRazor responds:

Thanks, I will^^

[[E-10}=: PrOdUcT := Fin]

there was something lacking

the sounds were kind of bland and the different pieces of the song didn't go together quite well.

1EtHeR0 responds:

This was my first piece of its kind...
Give me some credit...

[bleeding heart]

time for soem better recording equipment

its almost hard to listen to. if you want soem tips for better recording pm me with the equipment you use.

jobelow responds:

this is really just a quickly thrown together demo, mainly to teach my band. plus i make it harsh and hard to listen to on purpose. appreciate the offer, but i've been producing for a while and have some pretty good equipment. i know it's not palettable to the general public, but i promise i know what i'm doing.

[<Mind Soothe>]

cool

i like your style. clear up some of the stuff though. the main melody was killing my ears. i had to bring down your grade a bit for clarity.

Dj-Ene responds:

Thanks for the review. But I don't understand why it killed your ears though:P was it too loud? too repetive? too messy? it certainly didn't kill my ears...

-Ene

[Point 75]

sounds more like DnB

it sounds really cool. theres jsut somethign about doing techno/dnb in 3/4 time that soesnt sound appealing. i think its just me though. besides my stupid complaint great job and keep it up

EFG-Zus responds:

Thanks man! I was trying to be creative as possible by doing the 3/4 bc I hadn't heard any techno like that before. Do you know of any other songs like that?